mom yawning and holding baby during Fresh 48 session - Documentary Family Photography

Community Critique – Jenna

Community Critique

This week we have a new image critique from a Fresh 48 session sent to us from Jenna of Jenna Christina Photography.  The photo was shot on a Nikon D750 using a Sigma 35mm.  Below is what the 3 contributors Jenna selected had to say:

mom yawning and holding baby during Fresh 48 session - Documentary Family PhotographyCelina:
I just love the moment captured in this image, it really depicts how a mom feels after giving birth. The fact that it’s broad daylight adds even more to the story and the beautiful side light definitely helps. It has me wondering if she gave birth early in the morning or during the night.  My eye goes straight to the mother’s face and expression, then my eyes circulate around to explore the scene and I discover the little baby’s head. It wasn’t clear to me that she was yawning at first, I thought that maybe she was in pain or crying. I am not sure if a slightly different expression would have helped or perhaps getting in closer might have done the trick. In a perfect world I would have loved to have seen more of the baby’s face. I realize that changing position would have made it hard to capture the intended story. Perhaps taking the photo from a slightly higher angle would have helped or again by cropping in or shooting closer. That would also we get rid of the wires to the right which I find don’t add to the story and can be a little distracting. I think making the photo black and white was a great choice and the conversion is beautiful. This photo brought so many memories and a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing.

Kym:
​Let me start off by saying what a special time to ​capture! However, I thought at first if she was in the pains of labor, until I noticed the cap on the baby. Her expression is somewhere between mid yawn and crying, which is what confused me. I feel that if you had positioned yourself more towards her shoulder to be able to get a peak of the baby’s face, it would tell the story a little stronger. I love the black and white, but think the shadows, especially around the baby and her left arm, need to be slightly lightened. Also the hot spot on her right hand to the crest of the blanket could be toned down. The exposure on her face is lovely! Shooting in hospital rooms can be tough, and I think you did very well with the composition and framing. You captured visual interest, and a moment any new parent would be happy to have in a birth session.

Natasha:
I like this moment that you’ve captured, it brings back a lot of memories for me & makes me smile. I’m sure that many Mums that see this would be able to relate to this moment – the tiredness of just giving birth. I think that the choice of the black & white conversion is a good one – it brings the focus on to the mother & away from the hospital equipment. I think that if you were to have got in closer, cropping out the cables & side table on the right just to the outside of the bed rail, you could have cut out those distracting elements & made a stronger image. You would still be able to see that she was still at the hospital by the bed & the wrist tags etc, all of that stuff to the right of the bed doesn’t add anything to the story. I really like the light on Mum’s face, it really leads you to her expression. I also like how her face is framed somewhat by the white pillow above her & to the left & then with the white baby blanket & the little hat on the baby’s head. Again, that helps draw the eye right where you want it. I think you made a good choice with the DOF that you used. The highlights are a little blown on the baby blanket & kind of compete with the light on the pillow to draw your eye away, so I would burn them a little if you could.
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father and son climb driftwood at the beach - Documentary Family Photography

March 14, 2016

Collective Post

“Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary.”
– Cecil Beaton

boy in disco pose with lights - Documentary Family PhotographyCelina Bailey

silhouette of hand in air at sunset- Documentary Family PhotographyMichelle McDaid

girl standing on ocean shore - Documentary Family PhotographyChrystal Cienfuegos

boy lying on shower floor - Documentary Family PhotographyNatasha Kelly

boy falls asleep while reading - Documentary Family PhotographyRobin Stephenson

boy holding baby - Documentary Family PhotographyGemma Robillard

Kids at water table - Documentary Family PhotographyJenny Rusby

father and son climb driftwood at the beach - Documentary Family PhotographyErika Roa

Family putting up tent - Documentary Family PhotographyHeather Bowser

boy looking through netting - Documentary Family PhotographyLacey Monroe

Boy golfing - Documentary Family PhotographyJodie Byrne

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LIttle girl's pigtail - Documentary Family PhotographyVicki Hull

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boy in messy room

Featured Project – Courtney Zimmerman and her 24mm

Featured, Featured Project

Last year Courtney Zimmerman of Carrying Wonder bought her dream lens, the Canon L Series 24mm 1.4.  Not only that, but she sold all of her other lenses and made a commitment to not purchase any other lenses for a year so that she could learn to master the 24mm focal length. Can you say gutsy?  Here is what Courtney has to say about her One Year, One Lens project. You can also check out her work on her site, facebook, and instagram.

children in jeep on African Plains

Please, introduce yourself and let us get to know you. Also, tell us about your journey as a photographer.

So I’m Courtney! I’m an introverted homeschooling mother of four, which means I never get enough alone time. I have two biological and two adopted kids, and they were all made in Uganda–I’ll let you figure that one out! My husband is a digital designer, and he loves what he does, and that makes me really happy. We currently live in southern Oregon in a straw bale home in the middle of nowhere, and I like it 5 days out of 7. I like ideas, and I despise folding laundry. I’m a recovering control freak. Story is my “thing,” and it has been for as long as I can remember.

My journey as a photographer started as a young girl obsessed with my own baby books. My parents divorced before I was 6, and I felt like the pictures in those baby books connected me to parts of my story that were unimaginable to me. That connection didn’t necessarily make me happy or sad, but it felt important. In college I ended up minoring in photography. I wasn’t very good, but the dark room was like my therapy. College was a very dark time in my life, and the dark room became a safe place to process not just pictures but life. That probably sounds deeper than it really was. The point is that I fell in love with the photographic experience and process even though I wasn’t very good at the art.

A couple years after college, my husband and I moved to Uganda, where we would spend the next 6 years of our lives serving with an orphan ministry. We started a family there. I took pictures, but there was no “why” behind my photographs. I deeply regret that. I wish I had known then what I know now about the art of storytelling as it relates to photography. But, thanks to Molly Flanagan and the master photographers she first introduced me to, I have a better understanding of that now. I’m still growing as a photographer, but my focus is growing as a storyteller; because making “cool pictures” gets boring really quickly for me. So now I don’t ask if it’s a good picture: I ask what it says.

kids jumping off log into lake

What did you find most challenging about working with the 24mm and only the 24mm throughout the year?

The most challenging thing was learning to work with the distortion in situations where there were lines everywhere–how to change my angle or position to make the distortion work in my favor rather than against me. I like the distortion of the 24, but it isn’t always easy to work with.

artist extending hands

Did you find that the 24mm worked particularly well for you in certain environments while you maybe would have preferred another focal length in other settings? In particular, what did you think about using the 24mm for portraits? 

The 24 is great indoors in small spaces. It’s great when you want to be forced to tell more of the story. It’s great when you feel like you have a tendency to get too close and keep thinking you should have backed up. It’s an awesome lens if your goal for a photograph is honesty. It is hella hard to use the 24 outside, especially if you’re trying to track down kids who are running every which way. Because you HAVE to get close! And the little ones always seem to run away just as you finally get there. But in those situations I always end up getting a good workout if not a good picture! As for portraits, I don’t recommend the 24 for traditional angles. You have to get creative. Distortion on the 24 is real, folks.

baby crawling after boy in splash pad

If you could only pick one image out of your one lens year as your favorite, which would it be and why?

That changes frequently. But right now my favorite is the one of the boy in his messy room, because it is a wonderful example of everything I love about the 24–and a picture I couldn’t have made without it!

boy in messy room

What long-lasting changes to your photography as a whole occurred as a result of using one lens for a year? Style? Approach? Attitude? Focus?

Limiting myself almost always leads to growth, and in my case that growth is often in confidence. My lack of confidence is what makes me, to this day, unable to play the piano in front of anybody even though I’ve played the piano since I was 4. I shake, get nervous, doubt myself, worry, sweat, shake more… you get the picture. When I limit myself, I take away certain excuses and doubts. I have to suck it up. Either I do it or I don’t. As an under-confident over-thinker, this is a really good thing, and in the case of playing the piano I eventually decided it wasn’t worth it. But with photography…well I’ve decided I can handle not being as awesome as I’d like to be. I believe the stories I have yet to tell are worth being brutally honest with myself now. It’s a good thing to come to grips with where I really am as an artist. It’s so tempting to blame my own lack of mastery on, well, everything. Insufficient equipment is one of those things. But when I submit myself to any kind of limitation (in this case it was simply a limitation of equipment), all I can do is own up to my own shortcomings and keep learning and growing. So though I probably grew in my photographic skills through my One Year, One Lens commitment, it’s the realistic perspective I’m thankful for.

boy on waterslide

Was there one session/photo/moment in particular that was your “ah ha” moment with the lens? 

Really, the first session I did solely with my 24–a session in Portland that covered a morning with an artist couple–was that “ah ha” moment, because I realized how fun this project was going to be–how freeing it was! It’s still one of my favorite sessions to date. Unfortunately, I recently re-did my site, and I lost all past blog posts (yes, I’m very frustrated…!), so I can’t share that session with you.

Editor’s Note:  Courtney was able to send us a link to an updated gallery for this session.  You can see it here.

artist in studio

Ultimately, after all you’ve learned about this lens, what would you say its strong points and weaknesses are?

Weaknesses: The 24 is a risky lens, because it is much harder to omit unwanted elements, and it has obvious distortion. You have to get up close and personal when you want a close shot, and, as with any fixed lens, you have to get up and move if you want to “zoom in” or “zoom out.”

Strengths: See above 🙂 Seriously, though, I’d say it’s riskiness is what makes it such a wonderful lens! Because in my opinion safe is boring.

bare child with markers on top of table

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